[Corrected] dear 토익 lc 전문 카페 장님

[Jim Lee]

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Hi thank you for giving us a chance to correct my daily. Please undertand my broken english. After 추석 it is getting cold nowdays. Therefor a lot of people have got a cold one of them is me. I have got a bad cold over a week. so my condition is in bad. to make my situation worse is i will have toeic test this sunday. I have not studied good enough to get a good score. Sorry i am writting about daily not situation. Just same stuff come to work and working and go back hoem walk my dog. It is very difficult for me to write daily. however, i will keep doing see ya tomorrow.	Hi, I’d like to thank you for giving me us a chance to write correct my daily diary. Please try to understand undertand my broken English english. After Thanksgiving, 추석 the weather it is getting colder nowadays nowdays. Therefore, a lot of people are catching a cold and I am one of those people. have got a cold one of them is me. I have had this got a bad cold for over a week now and . so my condition is very in bad. And to make my situation worse, is I i will be writing the TOEIC have toeic test this coming Ssunday. I have not studied and I feel that I may get a poor grade good enough to get a good score. I am sSorry for not writing i am writting about my daily not situation. Everyday is very similar. I jJust same stuff go come to work and working and come go back homeem. After I get home, I usually walk my dog. It is very difficult for me to write daily, but . however, I i will try my best to do it as often as I can keep doing Ssee youa tomorrow.
Comment: Your writing is quite good. I think with a little practice you will improve a lot. The flow of your sentences are okay. Keep up the great effort! Personal Comment: I hope you get over your cold soon. And, I can see that you’re a dog-lover. I used to have a dog myself. His name was Jerry. I gave him away because I couldn’t care for him. I often miss him a lot. And, best of luck in the TOEIC test this Sunday!

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I would really appreciate it you could corrected my broken sentence. My dog name is romy she is alovely dog.