<p>The title of this book is "Niagara Falls".</p><p>Niagara Falls share two countires, are America and Canada. Its mean is "the strait" or "the neck" because straddles the Canada-United States international border in both the province of Ontario. Niagara Falls consists of three waterfalls, American Falls, the Bridal Veil Falls, and the Horseshoe Falls.  The famous scientist Nikola Tesla, designed the first hydroelectric power in the Niagara Falls. While Niagara Falls is known for breathtaking scenery and impressive dimensios, it is also famous for daredevil stunts, the first person is 63-years-old school teacher and seceond person is Boddy Leach.  Niagara Falls has long been a tourist favorite for many resons. Famous wirters like Mark Twain and Chales Dichens had vistied Niagara Falls to writhe about it. It has also been site for movies and Tv shows, it also provides a source of entertainment. I think this book is wonderful.</p>
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첫댓글Here's the version with all corrections and removals marked: The title of this book is "Niagara Falls". ̶T̶h̶e̶ ̶m̶a̶i̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶N̶i̶a̶g̶a̶r̶a̶ ̶F̶a̶l̶l̶s̶.̶ Niagara Falls ̶s̶h̶a̶r̶e̶ is shared by two countr̶i̶r̶e̶s̶ countries: America and Canada. ̶N̶i̶a̶g̶a̶r̶a̶F̶a̶l̶l̶s̶ ̶i̶n̶ It's located in North America. Its ̶m̶e̶a̶n̶ name means "the strait" or "the neck" because ̶s̶t̶r̶a̶d̶d̶l̶e̶s̶ it straddles the Canada-United States international border ̶i̶n̶ ̶b̶o̶t̶h̶ between the province of Ontario and New York state.
The American̶p̶ and Bridal Veil Falls are located in New York, while the Horseshoe Falls ̶i̶n̶ is in Ontar̶i̶o̶ Ontario. The Hor̶e̶s̶s̶h̶o̶e̶ Horseshoe Falls is 670 meters wide, the American Falls is 850 meters wide. The Horseshoe Falls is ̶l̶a̶r̶g̶e̶s̶t̶ the largest of ̶t̶h̶r̶e̶e̶ the three and drops an average of 57 meters into the river below.
The famous scientist Nikola Tesla̶,̶ designed the first hydroelectric power ̶i̶n̶ plant at ̶t̶h̶e̶ Niagara Falls. While Niagara Falls is known for ̶b̶r̶e̶a̶t̶h̶t̶a̶k̶i̶n̶g̶ its breathtaking scenery and impressive dimensio̶s̶ dimensions, it is also famous for daredevil stunts. The first person ̶i̶s̶ to go over the falls in a barrel was a 63-year̶s̶-old school teacher. ̶H̶e̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶i̶n̶ ̶w̶o̶o̶d̶e̶n̶ ̶b̶a̶r̶r̶e̶l̶.̶ The second person ̶i̶s̶ was Bo̶d̶d̶y̶ Bobby Leach. An Italian woman was ̶o̶n̶l̶y̶ the only woman to cross ̶N̶i̶a̶g̶a̶r̶a̶ the Niagara gorge on a tightrope.
Niagara Falls has long been a tourist favorite for many reso̶n̶s̶ reasons. Famous wir̶t̶e̶r̶s̶ writers like Mark Twain and Cha̶l̶e̶s̶ Charles Dic̶h̶e̶n̶s̶ Dickens ̶h̶a̶d̶ ̶v̶i̶s̶t̶i̶e̶d̶ visited Niagara Falls to writ̶h̶e̶ write about it. It has also been ̶s̶i̶t̶e̶ a site for movies and T̶v̶ TV shows, ̶i̶t̶ ̶a̶l̶s̶o̶ providing a source of entertainment. I think this book is wonderful.
Teacher's comments: Gooooooooooood!! But writing summary doesn't mean that you need to write everything in the story! Read it carefully and then write the story you can remember and think it important!
첫댓글 Here's the version with all corrections and removals marked:
The title of this book is "Niagara Falls". ̶T̶h̶e̶ ̶m̶a̶i̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶N̶i̶a̶g̶a̶r̶a̶ ̶F̶a̶l̶l̶s̶.̶ Niagara Falls ̶s̶h̶a̶r̶e̶ is shared by two countr̶i̶r̶e̶s̶ countries: America and Canada. ̶N̶i̶a̶g̶a̶r̶a̶F̶a̶l̶l̶s̶ ̶i̶n̶ It's located in North America. Its ̶m̶e̶a̶n̶ name means "the strait" or "the neck" because ̶s̶t̶r̶a̶d̶d̶l̶e̶s̶ it straddles the Canada-United States international border ̶i̶n̶ ̶b̶o̶t̶h̶ between the province of Ontario and New York state.
The American̶p̶ and Bridal Veil Falls are located in New York, while the Horseshoe Falls ̶i̶n̶ is in Ontar̶i̶o̶ Ontario. The Hor̶e̶s̶s̶h̶o̶e̶ Horseshoe Falls is 670 meters wide, the American Falls is 850 meters wide. The Horseshoe Falls is ̶l̶a̶r̶g̶e̶s̶t̶ the largest of ̶t̶h̶r̶e̶e̶ the three and drops an average of 57 meters into the river below.
The famous scientist Nikola Tesla̶,̶ designed the first hydroelectric power ̶i̶n̶ plant at ̶t̶h̶e̶ Niagara Falls. While Niagara Falls is known for ̶b̶r̶e̶a̶t̶h̶t̶a̶k̶i̶n̶g̶ its breathtaking scenery and impressive dimensio̶s̶ dimensions, it is also famous for daredevil stunts. The first person ̶i̶s̶ to go over the falls in a barrel was a 63-year̶s̶-old school teacher. ̶H̶e̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶i̶n̶ ̶w̶o̶o̶d̶e̶n̶ ̶b̶a̶r̶r̶e̶l̶.̶ The second person ̶i̶s̶ was Bo̶d̶d̶y̶ Bobby Leach. An Italian woman was ̶o̶n̶l̶y̶ the only woman to cross ̶N̶i̶a̶g̶a̶r̶a̶ the Niagara gorge on a tightrope.
Niagara Falls has long been a tourist favorite for many reso̶n̶s̶ reasons. Famous wir̶t̶e̶r̶s̶ writers like Mark Twain and Cha̶l̶e̶s̶ Charles Dic̶h̶e̶n̶s̶ Dickens ̶h̶a̶d̶ ̶v̶i̶s̶t̶i̶e̶d̶ visited Niagara Falls to writ̶h̶e̶ write about it. It has also been ̶s̶i̶t̶e̶ a site for movies and T̶v̶ TV shows, ̶i̶t̶ ̶a̶l̶s̶o̶ providing a source of entertainment.
I think this book is wonderful.
Teacher's comments:
Gooooooooooood!!
But writing summary doesn't mean that you need to write everything in the story!
Read it carefully and then write the story you can remember and think it important!