1. 무적스쿨 took a place UNHCR event for refugees → 무적스쿨 held a fundraising event for Syrian refugees → A fundraising event for Syrian refugees took place in 무적스쿨
2. I could join the member of Gather Town → I joined the event and became a member of Gather Town (*** member 단어 발음 체크)
3. we sent a message for old moojukers → we sent a message to old moojukers → we sent a message to those who studied in 무적스쿨 before
4. we assembled old moojukers → we invited old moojukers over to Gather Town
5. a friend of mine said to me "please invite me to Gather Town" → a friend of mine asked me to invite him to Gather Town
6. she couldn't participate in the event. i was such an airhead. → she couldn't participate in the event. I was so sorry to her. I thought I was such an airhead.
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1. 무적스쿨 took a place UNHCR event for refugees
→ 무적스쿨 held a fundraising event for Syrian refugees
→ A fundraising event for Syrian refugees took place in 무적스쿨
2. I could join the member of Gather Town
→ I joined the event and became a member of Gather Town
(*** member 단어 발음 체크)
3. we sent a message for old moojukers
→ we sent a message to old moojukers
→ we sent a message to those who studied in 무적스쿨 before
4. we assembled old moojukers
→ we invited old moojukers over to Gather Town
5. a friend of mine said to me "please invite me to Gather Town"
→ a friend of mine asked me to invite him to Gather Town
6. she couldn't participate in the event. i was such an airhead.
→ she couldn't participate in the event. I was so sorry to her. I thought I was such an airhead.