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The problem I'd like to talk about is that student's smoking rates are increasing day by day. This is a problem because if you smoke, the environment will be polluted and your life span will be shortened. I'd like to propose three solutions to this problem. To begin with, provide candy to quit smoking. Eating a candy can reduce students’ smoking desire. Secondly, reinforce the rules related to smoking. By strengthening the rules, the smoking rate will be significantly reduced. Finally, reward for those who quit smoking. According to Maslow's desire hierarchy, when people are compensated for what they have done, they can solve their desires through other actions. For example, if you are compensated for non-smoking, you can meet your smoking needs with different behaviors. I think these three solutions can solve the problem effectively, and quit smoking is not an option but an obligation.