“Oil” is all you need in the autumn! (9,10월호) - 2차수정

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“Oil” is all you need in the autumn!

    Summer seem never to be end, but finally it is over, and then the autumn has come! So even during the day, it is quite chilly these days. Instead of the sweaty looks during the whole summer, the skin is gradually drying out from crown to toe. My skin feels tight and lacking in moisture. No matter how hard I try to apply the moisturizer, it doesn’t seemed to get better. In fact, because of the great temperature gap between day and night in the fall, the level of immunity is bound to drop. As a result, cutaneous circulation tends to slow down. Plus, unlike the summer breeze, the dry and cold wind makes the skin hard to repair itself. This is why we should apply the moisturizer frequently during this season in particular. Furthermore, it is very important to strengthen the skin barrier not to lose water from inner and surface of the skin.

    In the past, on a TV show, I saw some actress’ secrets of skin care for dry skin. They said, they try to use a face mist and reapply the moisturizer whenever their skin feels dry. Also, they never turn on the heater no matter how cold it is. Unfortunately, it is always dry in the cabin, and we can not follow the ways I have mentioned above because we have a lot of things to do. So, the right answer for us could be to use the “oil” which has a lot of nutritional contents and helps to trap water in the surface cells. Just throw the suntan oil away! Why don’t you start skin care with oil based cosmetics during this autumn instead? From now on, I would like to introduce our in-flight duty free items specially focused on the oil based cosmetics.

● Shu Uemura Clarifying Cleansing Oil;

- This upgraded formula is empowered with Papaya & Moringa extract to polish away dullness-causing pollutants (including PM2.5). Yellow dull skin is restored, leading to radiant, refined and supple skin.

● GUERISSON 9Complex Duo Set;

- Turn back time with the power of high-purity ceramide which is extremely rare. Maintains the moisturizing effects for 72 hours, helps to enhance suppleness, supports skin recovery, helps to tighten skin, helps the density of the corium, helps to improve the level of moistness, helps to strengthen the skin barrier.

● Santa Maria Novella Crema Idralia;

- The best selling product of Santa Maria novella, Crema Idralia, is a moisturizing cream for all skin types. Contains avocado oil which gives your skin a smooth feeling. Added rose gardenia scent leaves you comfortable and relaxed. For daily use.

● Moroccanoil Treatment Traveler Set;

- The signature Moroccan oil treatment in both 50ml and 25ml sizes – perfect for home or on-the-go! Infused with antioxidant-rich argan oil, the essential foundation for hairstyling.

    Let’s say goodbye to the summer! Because of the hot weather, it was really uncomfortable to go out and do makeup. However, welcoming the plentiful and cool autumn, if you do care about your skin moistness with oil, you can get soft and shinny skin and hair in this fall. So please remember! “Rich oil Autumn!”

from crown to toe 머리부터 발끝까지

the level of immunity 면역력

cutaneous circulation 피부순환

skin barrier 피부 보호막

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괜찮은내용인것 같아요 !

[susan8211]

첫문단 첫째 줄 never seemed to be ending
* end라는 동사 자체가 be동사랑 ing 로 많이 같이 쓰이지 않는 것 같아서요!
-> seem never to be end/ seemed never-ending
으로 바꿔주면 좋을 것 같습니당 :)

[susan8211]

글구 이건 개인적인 의견이욤!! 맘에 들면 반영하시구 아니면 버려주세요 크크

첫번 째 문단 마지막 부분이욤!
여름과 달리 가을 바람이 가지는 특징을 설명해주셨으니 특히나 "이 시즌=가을" 에는 더 moisturizer 많이 발라야 한다고 강조해주면 더 좋을 것 같습니다!

Plus, unlike the summer breeze, the dry and cold wind makes the skin hard to repair itself and this is why we should apply the moisturizer more frequently during this season in particular.