I talked about this story welcome to the Fan Club! "Welcome to the Fan Club!"
First, detail details: First ,detail . Last sunday Sunday, Ava was finally finished with finally finished reading the Harry Potter series. But she still had many questions about the ending. So she started looking online for more information. During her search. During her search, Many many member members had different opinions about the story's event events. Many people liked her story and left many kind comments. She decided to creat create her own fan art and upload it with her stories. Being a fan is so fun Ava said "Being a fan is so fun," Ava said.
Second, my felt my feelings: The book is interesting because Harry Potter is good.
Score: B
Tips)
- 책 제목은 따옴표(" ")로 묶어주세요.
- 문장은 항상 대문자로 시작하고 마침표로 끝내세요.
- 'Sunday'는 항상 대문자로 시작해요.
- '만들다'는 영어로 'create'예요. 'a'를 빼먹지 마세요.
- 대화를 쓸 때는 따옴표(" ")를 사용해요.
- '내 감정'을 영어로 쓸 때는 'my feelings'라고 해요.
- 왜 해리 포터가 좋은지 더 자세히 설명해 보면 좋겠어요.