The book's title is 'Welcome to our fanclub' "Welcome to Our Fanclub". Ava was finished reading finished reading Harry Potter. But she has had more questions of about the end ending, and Ava joined a fanclub. There was some an event, write to write created new content about Harry Potter. Ava feels felt excited and starts started to write. She was so sad when her favorite character was died died. She wrote her favorite character was revive that her favorite character was revived. Many people were like liked her writing and writing wrote good comments. She uploaded her fanart and said, "It was fun!"
Score: B
Tips)
- 책 제목은 따옴표(" ")로 묶고 중요한 단어는 대문자로 시작해요.
- 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용해요. 예: 'finished', 'had', 'felt', 'started'
- '~에 대해'는 'of' 대신 'about'을 사용해요.
- '죽었다'는 'was died' 대신 'died'로 써요.
- '살아났다'는 'was revived'로 써요.
- '좋아했다'는 'were like' 대신 'liked'로 써요.
- '댓글을 썼다'는 'wrote comments'로 써요.
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