Re: 1c209 Rai

[Teacher1]

The book's title is Milly,Molly "Milly, Molly and Aunt Maude". Andt Aunt Maude broken broke her leg, and last which would take six week weeks to heal. Aunt made Maude was so angry and sad. She said she must wanted to grow a garden. Milly and Molly recomend recommended she were waiting that while she was waiting for her leg to heal, she can could do knitting. Frist First time, she said no, and didn't knit. But Mr. smily Smiley come came and said, encouraged Aunt Muide Maude to start knitting. Frist At first, time her knitting was bad but Aunt Muide beco,e Maude began to like it. Six weeks later, she was going to get start some gardening, but Aunt Maude doesn't didn't want to go out and she was continued knitting. She gave some knite knitted bed blankets to the hospital.

Score: B-

Tips)

1. 책 제목은 따옴표(" ")로 묶어요.
2. 인물 이름은 항상 같은 철자로 써요. 예: 'Aunt Maude'
3. 'broke her leg'는 과거형이에요. 'broken'은 과거분사형이에요.
4. 시간 표현은 복수로 써요. 예: 'six weeks'
5. 'First'의 철자에 주의해요. 'Frist'가 아니라 'First'예요.
6. 간접 화법을 사용할 때는 시제를 바꿔야 해요. 예: 'can' → 'could'
7. 'become'의 철자에 주의해요.
8. '뜨개질한 담요'는 'knitted blankets'라고 해요.
9. 이야기의 흐름을 더 자연스럽게 만들기 위해 연결어를 사용해 보면 좋겠어요.