Re: 1c57 summary charlotte

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Bluebeard was an old rich man old rich man.
→ 설명: 모음 앞에는 an을 써요.

He was lonely and want wanted to get married.
→ 설명: 과거 이야기라서 wanted가 맞아요.

one One day, blue beard Bluebeard met a young woman on the beach.
→ 설명: 문장 첫 글자와 이름은 대문자예요.

bluebeard want to come his mansion with young woman Bluebeard wanted the young woman to come to his mansion.
→ 설명: 문장 순서를 자연스럽게 고쳤어요.

young woman went his mansion The young woman went to his mansion.
→ 설명: 장소 앞에는 to가 필요해요.

young woman The young woman ate lobsters.
→ 설명: 문장 처음은 대문자예요.

Young woman The young woman married blue beard Bluebeard.
→ 설명: 이름은 항상 대문자로 써요.

The bluebeard get a sleep Bluebeard fell asleep, the young woman steal stole his mansion key around his nack neck.
→ 설명: 과거형 fell, stole, 철자 neck이에요.

Young woman opens The young woman opened the mansion, and there are were other wife's wives in the mansion.
→ 설명: 과거형 opened, were, 복수는 wives예요.

Young woman put blue beard forever The young woman left Bluebeard forever.
→ 설명: 뜻에 맞게 left가 자연스러워요.

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Score: B-

Tips)

• 옛날 이야기라서 과거형(wanted, stole, opened) 쓰기

• 이름은 항상 대문자(Bluebeard)

• 여러 명은 wives처럼 복수형 쓰기