Re: Read it. Adam

[Teacher1]

The title is "There are Bugs in My drink Drink". The Cochineal cochineal is a bugs bug. But we Maby maybe eat Cochineal cochineal. Many companies use Cochineal cochineal extract to dye their drinks. The They grind the Cochineal cochineal and mixed mix it with water. It turns the water red. But some people can develop allergies. The strawberry milk brands stopped coloring their strawberry milk color is white so it's white. I know this story don't After reading this story, I don't want to eat strawberry milk. The story is good.

Score: B

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