Re: Caillou Rai

[Teacher Winget]

The comic's title is "Caillou: Watch Rosie."

Caillou and Rosie play aloud were playing loudly.
But their mom had a headache.

Caillou's mom is pleased to Caillou be a big brother was happy that Caillou was being a big brother
and asked him to take care of Rosie quality nicely.

His mom gave a growing kit to them, and they drew the animals.
But Rosie drew a picture on the wall!

Caillou is so angry because abuse her mom didn't here what he saying
was angry because his mom didn’t hear what he was saying.

But Caillou's mom came back to Caillou's romm Caillou's room and helped Caillou.

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Score: B+

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Tips 

• “play aloud” → “play loudly”가 맞아요. aloud는 소리 내어 읽을 때 쓰는 말이에요.

• “Caillou be a big brother” → 문장 순서가 틀렸어요. → “Caillou was being a big brother”로 고쳐야 해요.

• “here”는 들린다는 뜻이 아니에요. → hear가 맞는 말이에요.

• “romm”은 철자 실수예요 → room

• Rosie가 벽에 그림을 그렸을 때 Caillou가 어떤 말을 했는지 써보면 더 좋아요.

• 엄마가 도와주는 장면에서 Caillou의 기분을 표현해 보세요.