[Corrected] Impression story,,,

[Jim Lee]

Your writing	My corrections
A few days ago, I went to book store with my neice. I bought a book for my young girl who will enter elemetary shcool this March. I want to bless her future. In the bookstore I examed all kinds of book. What is good for her? She is starting her life in the small socety so called school. Not so far I could find a book. The title is 'Y O U A R E S P E C A I L ' Hmmm. It sounds good~ And I began to read down, It was about the story- woodman called "wemmik". When I read it, I could find somethig drop from my eyes. As a result, I bought the book having the story on Wemmik. My niece wanted other books cantaining beautiful illustaration and being able to read easily. But I would like you say her, My pretty girl.. Don't forget it in your mind. If you are fristarated or someone rebuke your falses and point out your mistakes...Eventhough you do that, you are specail.. Because you are you ..there is no reason. And you can lead you life successfully. I love you so much..Eunchong.	A few days ago, I went to a book store with my nieice. I bought a book for my niece young girl who will be entering an elementary schcool this March. I want to bless her future. In the bookstore I examined all kinds of books. Whichat one is good for her? She is starting her life in a the small society so called school. Not so long after, far I could was able to find a book. The title is 'Y O U A R E S P E C A I L ' Hmmm. It sounds good~ And I began to read down, It was about the story- woodman called "wemmik". When I read it, I felt could find something drop from my eyes. As a result, I bought the book having the story on Wemmik. My niece wanted other books that contain cantaining beautiful illustrations aration and being able to and easy to read read easily. But I said to her, would like you say her, My pretty girl.. Don't forget it in your mind. If you are frustrated fristarated or someone rebukes your falults ses and point out your mistakes...Eventhough you remember that do that, you are specialail.. Because you are you ..there is no reason. And you can lead you life successfully. I love you so much..Eunchong.
Comment: Good writing!  However, you seem to be making common spelling mistakes.  Take a good look at my corrections and see if you can do better tomorrow. Personal comment: It sounds like you love your niece very much.  And what you have said to her is very important for her self confidence.