Re: Read it summery Isabella

[Teacher Winget]

The book's title is "The Strongest Beetle." After I read this book, I learned about beetles once again because this book is about beetles. The beetle is very stronger strong because it always rolls dung. I know that rolling dung makes it stronger, but I wonder how something with such a small body can become so stronger strong. The answer is that as it rolls the dung, it supports its hands and pushes the dung with its legs, and it gets stronger. In my standards By my standards, I've thought about what to do with something that lightweight and call it exercise, but I think it's harder than I thought to roll dung bigger than its own body with such a small body.

Score: B+

Tips:

• 'stronger'는 'strong'으로 수정하세요, 여기서는 비교급이 필요하지 않아요.
• 'In my standards'는 'By my standards'로 수정하면 더 자연스러워요.
• 시제와 표현이 자연스러워지도록 작은 수정들을 했습니다.