Hello, Huse. This is Neal, Friday B.V.C assistant.
I couldn’t believe your presentation was exceptionally exciting
and lively!
I could figure out how much efforts you invested in. I’m sure it
was a stage from which no one could tear themselves away.
Yet there is room for improvement. You can change for the
better, if you accept my advice and practice it.
[Pronunciation]
If you are not sure about the sound, I recommend you make a visit this
site
(http://www.merriam-webster.com)
1. attractive [v] sound is weak
2. feeling- [ee], mean- [ea] You
are advised to pronounce as long as you can.
[Accent & Intonation]
I wish you to listen to audio file more and follow native speaker's
intonation.
[Ending sound]
Way to go!
[Mission]
Let’s get over the stage fright via practicing a lot!!
My sincere hope for you is that these comments above help you become a
better presenter. If you have any question, feel free to ask me at any time
without hesitation. I always root for you! See you anon J
첫댓글 Thank you for your sincere advice. I couldn't wait to watch my video but.. I was embarrassed while seeing it..
I obviously found out my problems of pronounciations and gestures during the presentation.
I will practice that points as much as I can and then, I want to show you performance better.