[Corrected] Re:may 9

[Jim Lee]

Your writing	My corrections
I was very busy last weakend. I watched two movies and I went to Paju to participate in the Marathon. and I wrote the two letters for my parents and got the flower due to the Mother'ts day. so I totally exhausted because I especaily ran the 10km with my teacher. It was first time to participate in the Marathon and run the 10km. The weather is  cloudy. and it is cool rather than hot . Firtst the teacher worried about whether I finished the 10km. Overally I didn't feel tired to run. When I feel tired is I reach the finish nearly.  When I managed to finish it and went through the finish , I felt accomplishment and confidence. It takes about 55minute .My legs are out of control in a while. but  It was a good experience to me.	I was very busy last weeakend. I watched two movies and I went to Paju to participate in a the Marathon. and I also wrote the two letters to for my parents and got some the flowers for due to the Mother'ts day. so I  now feel totally exhausted because I especaily ran the 10km run with my teacher. It was my first time to participatinge in a the 10 km. Mmarathon and run the 10km. The weather is was cloudy. and it wasis cool rather than hot . At first, Firtst the teacher was worried about whether I could finished the 10km run. Overally I didn't feel tired to run. At first I was not tired but by the end of the run, I was very tired. When I feel tired is I reach the finish nearly.  When However, I managed to finish it and went through the finish line. , I felt the accomplishment and felt confidentce. It took takes about 55minutes .My legs are sore at the moment but out of control in a while. but  It it was a good experience for to me.
Comment: Good writing…I am glad to hear that you enjoyed running a marathon….you should continue running every week to keep in shape.