[Corrected] Please, Be sure not to catch a cold^^

[Jim Lee]

Your writing	My corrections
Hi^^JIM ^_^. I'm feeling so bad and my head is pounding. It may be a symptom of cold.^^ Well, with such a bad condition I took a job interview in the afternoon. No one may not demolish my upbeat passion that I went to the company that is situated in Kang-Nam. Actually, I didn't bring much expectation with me. As usual, a person who interviewed me grabed a heap of application forms with smug smile^^ From minute to minute,so conventional questions came out, uncomfortable feeling so on... and even if I was interrogated^^ such as why don't you still have a job, what is a goal of your life... Finally, the test of speaking ability was done, because the part of the job I applied was international trading and overseas sales^^ I am going to take a second round next week, I will be finalised whether I am hired or not..^^ Sound so horrible, isn't it? I guess, to land a job is a sort of battles^^^^ So we have to beat the other applicants as long as we want to win^^ Once again, I am so depressed with thoes kind of social realities.	Hi^^JIM ^_^. I'm feeling so bad and my head is pounding. It may be a symptom of cold.^^ Well, with such a bad condition, I wenttook to a job interview in the afternoon. No one may not demolish my upbeat passion. that I went to the company that is situated in Kang-Nam. Actually, I didn't takebring much expectation with me. As usual, a person who interviewed me grabbed a heap of application forms with a smug smile^^ From minute to minute, so conventional questions came out, uncomfortable feeling, and so on... Aand even if I wereas interrogated^^ with such questions as why don't you still  have a job?, what is thea goal of your life?, etc.... Finally, the test of speaking ability was done, because the part of the job I applied was for international trading and overseas sales^^ I am going to take thea second interviewround next week. , I will be notifiedfinalised  whether I am hired or not at that interview..^^ Sound so horrible, doesn’tisn't it? I guess, to land a job is a sort of battles^^^^ So wWe have to beat the other applicants as long as we want to win^^ Once again, I am so depressed with thoses kind of social realities.
Comment:  Great writing!  You are making some mistakes here and there.  Take a look at my corrections. Personal comment:  Well, I really do hope that you will get the job you have applied for today.  Keep your chins up and think positively.  Also, life is an uphill struggle but on your way up, you will gain the most precious gift life has to offer, “Experience and Wisdom”. :-)

[going well..]

Good job^^JIM..I am so glad to know of that I made mistakes^^ Thank you for letting me know^^

[Jim Lee]

You are welcome! Keep up the great effort! Talk to you again soon...see ya!