Re: 2A 235-Sofia Oh

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The title of this book is "Fish in the Forest."
On day, One day, a poor farmer found a box of gold coins and hide hid the golds gold under the floor with his wife.
Later, the man began to worry because wife is gossip. his wife was a gossip.
So, he hid gold the gold under a pile.
And he said to wife his wife, "Tomorrow we'll go hunting for fish in the forest."
He dropped the fish and placed cakes in a tree.
And he put the dead rabbit on a fish hook. Then, he put a dead rabbit on a fishhook.
After, farmer took his wife into the forest. After that, the farmer took his wife into the forest.
The wife was surprised.
At the end of week, the week, the farmer and wife was his wife were summoned.
He said to lord, the lord, "My wife is crazy."
Lord look The lord looked under the floor of the house.
And there were nothing. But there was nothing.Score: B-Tips)

1. "On day" → "One day" ("On day"은 틀린 표현이고, "One day"가 맞아요!)
2. "hide" → "hid" (과거형을 사용해야 해요.)
3. "wife is gossip" → "his wife was a gossip" (문장 구조를 맞춰야 해요.)
4. "golds" → "gold" ("gold"는 셀 수 없는 명사라서 "golds"라고 하면 안 돼요.)
5. "Lord look" → "The lord looked" (과거형과 관사를 추가해야 해요.)
6. "And there were nothing" → "But there was nothing." (문장을 자연스럽게 수정했어요!) 😊