Re: Read it summary (Andy)

[Teacher1]

Read it unit 16 reading, I learned US U.S. flag have has fifty stars cause for a reason. This reason is The reason is that a high school student is made the US U.S. flag. I surprised was surprised that a high school student change changed the US U.S. flag. In 1958, the US U.S. flag have had fourty forty-eight stars. And, I'm After Read it reading unit 16 reading, I was interesting interested in the US U.S. US The U.S. flag stars mean is stars' meaning is the US U.S. states state number. So, I learn learned many informations pieces of information.

Score: B-

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1. 미국의 약자는 'US'가 아니라 'U.S.'입니다. 점을 꼭 찍어주세요.
2. '정보'는 셀 수 없는 명사예요. 'many pieces of information'이라고 써보세요.
3. 과거 시제를 사용할 때 동사 형태에 주의하세요. 예를 들어 'I surprised'는 'I was surprised'가 되어야 해요.
4. 미국 국기에 대해 더 자세히 설명해보세요. 예를 들어, 줄무늬의 의미도 있나요?