Re: 3/9 summery [Jintaek]

[Teacher1]

he title of this story is "Caillou's Quarrel."

Oneday One day, mom's friend and her Clementine named Clementine Mom's friend and her daughter Clementine visited Caillou's house.
And Mom said, "Let's play with Clementine in your room."
Then Caillou and Clementine went to his room.
Caillou wanted to play with dinosaur toy a dinosaur toy.
But Clementine wanted to play with a doll.
Then Caillou said to her, "I want to play with a dinosaur toy!!!"
But Clementine play played with a doll.
Then Caillou kicked her out of his room.
A few minutes later, they apologized to each other.
And Clementine's big brother visited his house.
He was a baseball champion.
They played baseball.
Finally, Caillou said to his mom, "I like to play with Clementine!!"

I think this story is interesting.

Score: Ao

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Tips)

• "Oneday"는 "One day"처럼 띄어 써야 해요.
• "mom's friend and her Clementine"은 "her daughter Clementine"으로 고쳐야 자연스러워요.
• "wanted play"는 "wanted to play", "dinosaur toy"는 "a dinosaur toy"로 고쳐야 해요.
• "play with doll"도 "play with a doll"처럼 써야 해요.
• "apologized each other"는 "apologized to each other"가 맞아요.

이야기의 흐름이 잘 정리되어 있고, 감정 표현도 잘했어요!
Caillou의 마지막 말로 따뜻하게 끝나서 더 좋아요 😊