Here's the corrected version:
The book's title is Milly Molly and little dot Little Dot. One day farmer Farmer Hegarty's plumpest ewe had a the littlest lamb in the flock**. ** Molly and Molly Milly and Molly were . Captivated captivatedthey . They rested watched and saw smell smelled a butter cup buttercupthey . They think thought we can protect buttercup Buttercupthey . They feels felt a heartbroken broken. They made a small raincoat with the a bread bag and tied it carefully under little Little Dot's chin**.** little Little dot Dot fascinated was fascinated too**.** the The book is good**.**
Score: B
Tips)
- 이야기의 순서를 더 잘 정리해보세요. 무슨 일이 먼저 일어났고, 그 다음에 무슨 일이 일어났는지 순서대로 써보세요.
- 'Milly'와 'Molly'가 무엇을 했는지 더 자세히 설명해보세요.
- 문장을 끝낼 때는 항상 마침표를 찍어주세요.
- 고유 명사(사람 이름이나 특별한 이름)는 항상 대문자로 시작해야 해요.