Re: 김동휘 주말과제

[Teacher1]

One Day, Caillou's Missing Sock

One day, Caillou looked for socks,
but Caillou couldn't find one sock.

He went inside a room.

Caillou broke the door handle,
and he was stuck inside.

Daddy opened the door.

Caillou and Daddy looked for the sock.

After that, Mom closed the room too.

Score: C-

Tips)

1. 문법: "one day stories caillou missing sock" → "One Day, Caillou's Missing Sock." (제목을 올바르게 고쳐야 해요!)
2. 문법: "one day Caillou look socks" → "One day, Caillou looked for socks." (look 대신 과거형 looked for가 맞아요.)
3. 문법: "but caillou bon't find a one sock" → "but Caillou couldn't find one sock." (bon't은 없는 단어예요. couldn't find가 맞아요.)
4. 문법: "caillou broken door handle" → "Caillou broke the door handle." (broken 대신 broke, 그리고 door handle 앞에 the 추가해야 해요.)
5. 문법: "caillou is shut up." → "He was stuck inside." (shut up은 다른 뜻이므로 was stuck inside가 맞아요.)
6. 내용: Caillou가 왜 양말을 찾고 있었는지, 그리고 문이 닫혔을 때 어떤 기분이었는지 더 설명하면 이야기가 더 좋아질 거예요! 😊