Re: 1C 211 summary(Andy)

[Sub Tutor]

Here's the corrected version:

This story's title is "Milly, Molly and Little Dot". Farmer Hegarty's sheepcote in sheep had the littlest lamb. Farmer Hegarty said**,** "This sheep**'s** name is little dot Little Dot". Milly and Molly go went with little dot Little Dot. Then, a huge black storm cloud came to Milly, Molly and little dot Little Dot. They put it on a raincoat on little dot Little Dot. That night**,** the storm raged. They worried about little dot Little Dot. But little dot is little dot is Little Dot was right alright. After little dot go Little Dot went with Milly and Mollyis, they enjoyed themselves.

Score: B

Tips)

• 문장을 더 길게 만들어 이야기를 자세히 설명해보세요. 예를 들어, Little Dot의 모습이나 날씨를 더 자세히 묘사해볼 수 있어요.
• 과거 시제를 사용할 때는 동사의 형태가 바뀌어요. 예를 들어 'go'는 'went'가 돼요.
• 문장과 문장 사이에 연결 단어를 사용해보세요. 예를 들어 '그리고', '하지만', '그래서' 같은 단어들이에요.
• 대화를 쓸 때는 큰따옴표("")를 사용하고, 맨 앞에 누가 말했는지 쓰는 것이 좋아요.