Re: 1C 211 summary (Yulia)

[Sub Tutor]

Here's the corrected version:

The title of this book is "Milly, Molly and Little Dot**."** The black baby sheep was in the flock**.** Farmer Hegarty named the black baby sheep Little dot Dot. Milly and Molly had fun with Little dot Dot. Suddenly, It it turned bitterly cold. Milly and Molly were feeding crusts to the hens. At night, Milly and Molly wa were worrying about Little dot Dot. Next morning, Little dot Dot was warm and dry~~.~~ because Little dot Dot was wearing a raincoat. Little dot Dot met her new friends. Little dot Dot enjoyed being with her new friends. But she was smaller than her new friends. Times Some time later, a black sheep came up to Milly and Molly. Milly and Molly thought it was Little dot Dot.

Score: B+

Tips)

• 문장과 문장 사이에 공백을 넣어주면 읽기 더 쉬워져요.
• 'Little Dot'은 이름이니까 항상 'Dot'을 대문자로 써주세요.
• '갑자기'나 '그 후에' 같은 단어를 사용해서 이야기의 흐름을 더 잘 보여줄 수 있어요.
• 왜 Milly와 Molly가 Little Dot을 걱정했는지, 그리고 Little Dot이 어떻게 변했는지 더 자세히 설명해보세요.