Hello, Aeron
This is Lily, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending
Friday Basic Voice Coaching class. I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further
performance, I would like to give some informative
and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them
into a practice.
Pronunciation
Measure(s) - [ˈme-zhər] please check pronounce
through here
Visibly, every - [v] sound was weak
link(ed) - [ŋ] sound was weak ( [líŋkt] )
Ending sound
consist[s]
gear[s]
Accent&
Intonation
Perfect!
Mission
Make your eye contact freely with
audiences.
If you keep attending this presentation
class on every Friday, you can improve presentation skills
along with your better English skills.
If there
is anything that I can help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without
hesitation.
Your dedication in studying English always
inspires me a lot. Thank you!
첫댓글 Thank you for your proof-listening!