Re: 1c 212 sofia

[Sub Tutor]

Corrected Text:

The book’s title is Milly, Molly, and Oink.

One day, Farmer Hegarty felt incomplete without a pig. Every year, Rosie would build herself but oink is different (raise herself, but Oink was different).
Onik (Oink), Farmer Hegarty’s little piglet, was so tiny and weak that it could barely move.
Milly and Molly taking care of Oink had gone oink their threw (took care of Oink by throwing) a box of cabbages into the pen.
Oink began to thrive, and soon he became so strong.
I think this book is so fun.

I think Oink is so cute. I want to grew (raise) Oink.

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Score: B-

Tips):

• 'build herself' → 'raise herself': 'build herself'는 맞지 않아요, 'raise herself'가 적절한 표현입니다.
• 'Onik' → 'Oink': 철자 오류입니다.
• 'taking care of Oink had gone oink their threw' → 'took care of Oink by throwing': 문장이 어색하여 더 자연스럽게 수정했습니다.
• 'grew' → 'raise': 'grow'는 동물이 스스로 자랄 때 쓰이고, 'raise'는 내가 동물을 키울 때 쓰여요.