Hello, Charlie
This is Rey, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending Friday Basic Voice Coaching
class.
I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further performance, I would like to give
informative and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them into a practice.
Pronunciation
I referred to your
video clip taken for this story to check more clearly
much - [ch] pronounce
with putting your mouth more outside and in a shape of circle
publish - [sh] it is same as above
internal - [r] sound is weak
could / would - I
personally recommend you to pronounce more flexibly
Ending sound
It was good enough to be against my expectation.
Accent & Intonation
Basically,
your pronunciation is good. I think, you perfectly know where your tongue
should be placed when you pronounce R, TH, and L. Those words were mostly clear
and accurately pronounced. But, your mouth shape is small to show what you've
practiced for the pronunciation.
And,
sometimes when you involuntarily did not care about pronouncing R and L, it
sounded weak.
Lastly,
Your effort, trying to put gesture on the presentation, should be considered as
paradigm for the all of student to copy. Now, as it is in progress to become
good presenter, it seems like you routinely revolve your gesture regardless of
the contents after rotating one cycle you prepared.
I wish
it takes you further.
If you keep attending this presentation class on every Friday, you can
improve presentation skills along with your better English skills.
If there is anything that I can
help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without hesitation.
Your dedication in studying
English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!
첫댓글 I always want you😘