Hello, Cohen
This is Rey, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending Friday Basic Voice Coaching
class.
I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further performance, I would like to give
informative and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them into a practice.
Pronunciation
I referred to your
video clip taken for the mantra to check more clearly
challenge - [ch] pronounce
with placing your mouth more outside
accountable - [cc]
accent should put on here
growth - [th] Air should come out
more obviously and, sometimes air sound of [f] was omitted, too.
will - [L] it sounds intermittently
weak
Ending sound
Gooooooood !
Accent & Intonation
Your
pronunciation is good and your captivating voice is good enough to drag
everyone's attention in the class. I think, you perfectly know where your
tongue should be placed when you pronounce R, TH, and L. Those words were mostly
clear and accurately pronounced. But, sometimes when you involuntarily did not
care about pronouncing R, TH and L, it sounded weak.
And,
as I said in the class room, I found one of your video clip taken about audio
file is certainly better than the other's in terms of intonation. I personally recommend
you to practice with memorizing audio file for making more closer intonation to
American sound. (I will try too.)
By the way, why do
you consistently back down on your word that you would change your introduction
kkkk.
I wish
it takes you further.
If you keep attending this presentation class on every Friday, you can
improve presentation skills along with your better English skills.
If there is anything that I can
help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without hesitation.
Your dedication in studying English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!