Hello, Zoe Moon
This is Rey, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending Friday Basic Voice Coaching
class.
I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further performance, I would like to give
informative and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them into a practice.
Pronunciation
I referred to your
video clip taken for this story to check more clearly
and your words were clear.
Ending sound
You are good
Accent& Intonation
Certainly,
your pronunciation is obviously clear.
I have nothing but praise, when it comes to pronunciation.
Every words
were mostly clear and accurately pronounced in my view.
When
you were on the podium, there was no vestige of tension and
you seemed to be stable and confident.
While watching your presentation, I was able to easily find out how you had
practiced intensively to deliver this story like a reading fairy tale and which
part were you trying to emphasize.
I have
felt when I see your video or presentation, sometimes your pronunciation sounds
to be dragged for a while than it has to be, and those sounds are reminiscent
of Korean to me.
In the
light of your talent and capability, you still possess high potential to
develop and you can pull it off.
As our mantra goes, we can change for the better.
I wish it takes you further.
If you keep attending this presentation class on every Friday, you can
improve presentation skills along with your better English skills.
If there is anything that I can
help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without hesitation.
Your dedication in studying
English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!