Hello, Julie
This is Rey, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending Friday Basic Voice Coaching
class.
I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further performance, I would like to give
informative and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them into a practice.
Pronunciation
I referred to your
video clip taken for this story to check more clearly
but, I found on the podium was better than your video clip.
Ending sound
Have you ever heard the song ending of cherry blossoms?
Accent & Intonation
I
was astonished at your presentation and pronunciation.
While watching your presentation, I found you added more gesture compared last
week and you are so talented in imitating the sound of audio file.
Your gesture and facial expression obviously
gets along well on your presentation by considering the contents and it seems
to be filled with confidence.
As I have said so far, your pronunciation is really good as much as Steven(^___^)
Your presentation skills are gradually evolving, as this time, too, was slightly
yet obviously better than last time.
In my view, you put proper acting on the proper part you planned to highlight
I always admire your positive mindset.
As our mantra goes, let us rise to the occasion and hold ourselves accountable
I wish it takes you further.
If you keep attending this presentation class on every Friday, you can
improve presentation skills along with your better English skills.
If there is anything that I can
help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without hesitation.
Your dedication in studying
English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!