Hello, Neal
This is Meley, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending
Friday Basic Voice Coaching class. I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further
performance, I would like to give some informative
and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put
them into a practice.
Pronunciation
Many something? (0:27) – I could not hear the
words clearly.
The half (of the) students? (1:03) – I could not hear the
words clearly.
Ending sound
10 munutes
Accent& Intonation
I liked
you trying to raise your voice. I could feel your passion!!
But one
thing I want you to remind is to speak more softly. (It was a bit aggressive)
In my
humble opinion, in the intro part “If I can be a mjk teacher,” it might be
better if you put more distinctive intonation on it (like Joel Austin^^)
Try to emphasize
certain points that you want to stress on!
Missions
I will root for your incompatible
success in the BVC competition!!
If you keep attending this presentation
class on every Friday, there is no doubt in my mind that you can improve
presentation skills
along with your better English skills.
If there
is anything that I can help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without
hesitation.
Your dedication in studying English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!