Hello, Jenny
This is Rey, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending Friday Basic Voice Coaching
class.
I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further performance, I would like to give
informative and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them into a practice.
Pronunciation
I referred to your
video clip taken for the mantra to check more clearly
learn - [L] "L"
sound was weak
challenge - [ch] pronounce
with placing your mouth more outside
accountable - [cc]
accent should put on here
growth - [th] Air should come out
more obviously and, sometimes air sound of [f] was omitted, too.
will - [L] it sounds intermittently
weak
Ending sound
Gooooooood !
Accent& Intonation
Your
pronunciation is good and your introduction was good enough to drag everyone's
attention in the class. I found one of your video clip taken about audio file is
certainly better than the other's in terms of intonation. I personally recommend
you to practice with memorizing audio file for making more closer intonation to
American sound..
You must try to make your mouth shape more expand. It counts severely for every
student according to teacher Aaron. I will cheer your way
with MJ. If you have any question or something
feel free to ask me~_~ !
As our
mantra goes, we can change for the better.
I wish it takes you further.
If you keep attending this presentation class on every Friday, you can
improve presentation skills along with your better English skills.
If there is anything that I can
help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without hesitation.
Your dedication in studying English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!