Hello, This is Jay
This is Rey, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending Friday Basic Voice Coaching
class.
I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further performance, I would like to give
informative and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them into a practice.
Pronunciation
I referred to your
video clip taken for this story to check more clearly
shameful - [sh] pronounce
with putting your mouth more outside and in a shape of circle
awaken - [K] sound is a little bit weak.
afterwards - [r] "R"
sound is weak, I will inform you in person.
Ending sound
house - [se]
awaken - [en]
Accent& Intonation
Your
pronunciation is good and your introduction was good enough to drag everyone's
attention in the class.
While watching your presentation, I was able to easily find
out how you had practiced intensively to deliver this story like a reading
fairy tale and which part were you trying to emphasize.
As well as taking BVC class, continuously, having special care will guide you
into more efficient direction. I hope you leap at the chance as many as you can
swallow.
As our
mantra goes, let us make our way to the top of this field.
I wish it takes you further.
If you keep attending this presentation class on every Friday, you can
improve presentation skills along with your better English skills.
If there is anything that I can
help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without hesitation.
Your dedication in studying
English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!