Hello, Joe
This is Rey, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending Friday Basic Voice Coaching
class.
I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further performance, I would like to give
informative and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them into a practice.
Pronunciation
I referred to your
video clip taken for this story to check more clearly
wife - [f] pronounce
with placing your upper teeth more outside of your under lip and air sound
should come out more strongly
shouted - [sh] pronounce
with putting your mouth more outside and in a shape of circle
wake up - [a]
try to make your mouth shape more expand when you pronounce "a"
Ending sound
realized ,raised - [ed]
roll - [ll]
Accent & Intonation
your
gesture obviously gets along well on your presentation by considering the
contents and it seems to be filled with confidence.
Let
us train our self by taking Friday class consistently. It will guide you into
more confident way.
I will cheer your way with MJ.
As our mantra goes, let us rise to the occasion and hold ourselves accountable
I wish it takes you further.
If you keep attending this presentation class on every Friday, you can
improve presentation skills along with your better English skills.
If there is anything that I can
help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without hesitation.
Your dedication in studying
English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!