Hello, Fred
This is Rey, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending Friday Basic Voice Coaching
class.
I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further performance, I would like to give
informative and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them into a practice.
Pronunciation
return - [r] "R" sound is
relatively weak, I will inform you in person at your convenience.
scholar - check pronunciation through here
Ending sound
Gooood !
Accent & Intonation
Your powerful yet
stable voice was far enough to make everyone in class attract.
But, it would be more nicer if you put some gesture on
your presentation.
Next
time, I hope you put some gesture onto your presentation to emphasize
particular part that you want to highlight.
I hope you keep attending this class! it will be definitely affected on your
diverse skills of English.
If you have any question to me, feel free to ask me.
I am open to every when
I always admire your passionate and positive mindset.
As our mantra goes, let us rise to the occasion and hold ourselves accountable
I wish it takes you further.
If you keep attending this presentation class on every Friday, you can
improve presentation skills along with your better English skills.
If there is anything that I can
help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without hesitation.
Your dedication in studying
English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!