Hello, Garry
This is Rey, assistant of Friday’s BVC class.
I appreciate you attending Friday Basic Voice Coaching
class.
I am beyond delight to see your magnificent
presentation.,
For your further performance, I would like to give
informative and constructive pieces of advice.
I hope you to put them into a practice.
Pronunciation
I referred to your
video clip taken for this story to check more clearly
[f] pronounce
with placing your upper teeth more outside of your under lip and air sound
should come out more strongly
cloth - [th]
As many times as you practice with this sentence below, you will be able to get
more clear "TH" sound.
The thirty-three
thankful thieves thought that
they thanked the
other thirty-three thankful thieves throughout Thursday
The words colored in this color is to pronounce in
another way of the TH.
It also should place your tongue out of your teeth and bite your tongue. But,
you don't need to make air sound come out.
Let us try to make our mouth shape more expand. It counts significantly for
every student!
Ending sound
You are good ~!
Accent& Intonation
Comparing
with last week's presentation, your voice sounded to be more stable and calm.
And, the matter of eye contact is relatively easy fixed! on one condition that
you keep standing on the podium.
While watching your presentation, I was able to figure out how you had
practiced to deliver this story more naturally! If you have any question to me,
feel free to ask me.
I am open to every when
As our mantra goes, we can change for the better.
I wish it takes you further.
If you keep attending this presentation class on every Friday, you can
improve presentation skills along with your better English skills.
If there is anything that I can
help you, feel free to ask me at anytime without hesitation.
Your dedication in studying
English always inspires me a lot. Thank you!