Re: Read it 200 summary Samuel

[Teacher Winget]

The book's title is How Fish Communicate. After I read this book, I was very surprised because fish can communicate to with other fish. I didn't know about oyster toadfish, electric eels, and lantern fish before, but after reading this book, I learned about these fish. Oyster toadfish is communicates by making sounds. Electric eels is communicate by creating electricity. And lantern fish is communicate through light. Lantern fish is didn't hunting fish don't need to hunt because they attract small fish with their light.

The book is very good.

Score: B+

Tips:

1. 'Fish can communicate to other fish' 대신 'communicate with other fish'로 고치는 게 더 자연스러워요.
2. 'Oyster toadfish is communicate' 대신 'communicates'로 고쳐야 해요. 이 문장은 현재 시제로 쓰는 것이 더 자연스러워요.
3. 'Lantern fish is didn't hunting fish' 대신 'Lantern fish don't need to hunt because they attract small fish with their light'로 고치는 것이 더 명확하고 자연스럽습니다.
4. 내용에 약간의 더 설명이나 느낌을 추가하면 더 좋을 거예요. 예를 들어, 'I didn't know fish could communicate in so many interesting ways!' 같은 문장이면 좋겠네요.