The book's title is "Milly, Molly and BiddyBid." BiddyBid had a green full full green garden. Milly and Molly loved stay staying with BiddyBid. They wanted to know BiddyBid's garden secrets. Milly and Molly especially loved plums. But BiddyBid warned them, as they followed her past the plum tree. She put foxgloves on their fingertips. She gave them each a grass soldier. She pickup picked the petals off a daisy. Then**,** quite suddenly**,** BiddyBid yawned. The next morning**,** Milly and Molly woke up with spots. BiddyBid said, "Oh dear, please forgive me." So Milly and Molly forgive forgave BiddyBid. After I read this book, I thought it was funny for that thier their faces is were all of covered in spots.
Score: B+
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- 어순: '가득한 초록 정원'은 'full green garden'이에요.
- 동명사: '~하는 것을 좋아하다'는 'love staying'처럼 써요.
- 전치사: '손가락 끝에 놓다'는 'put on their fingertips'로 써요.
- 시제 일치: 과거 이야기의 동사는 과거형으로 써요. 예: forgave
- 철자 확인: 'their'의 철자를 정확히 쓰는 연습을 해보세요.