Re: 1C213

[Sub Tutor]

The book's title is Milly, Molly, and BiddyBid.
BiddyBid has a garden full of secrets.
Milly and Molly played with their fingertips and with buttercups.
There is a legend about buttercups: people get some buttercup on their face, and if it turns yellow, it means they like butter.
Milly and Molly love plums.
But BiddyBid said that if they eat too many plums, they will get sick or die.
They ate a little plum and went to sleep.
When they woke up, they were sick.
But they realized they were not sick because of the plums, and they knew she had lied.
She said, "I'm sorry."

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Score: B+

Tips):

• 'BiddyBib' → 'BiddyBid': 이름 철자가 잘못되었습니다.
• 'play there fingertip' → 'played with their fingertips': 문장을 더 자연스럽게 수정했습니다.
• 'butter cup' → 'buttercup': 합쳐서 한 단어로 써야 합니다.
• 'flum' → 'plum': 철자 오류입니다.
• 'they are not sick because of flum' → 'they were not sick because of the plums': 시제와 단어 철자를 수정했습니다.