Re: 1C-213 (Mark)

[Sub Tutor]

The title of this book is "Milly, Molly, and BiddyBid."

The main characters are Milly and Molly.

biddyBid (BiddyBid) had a garden, and this garden is (was) full of secrets. In the middle, grew a plum tree.
Milly and Molly loved to stay, share secrets, and eat plums with BiddyBid.
But BiddyBid warned them as they followed her past the plum tree.
They saw many flowers and talked about them.
She gave them a battle (bottle) of grass soldiers. She very carefully peeled the petals.
She showed them how to make a daisy chain, and they were happy.
But the next day, Milly and Molly woke up covered in spots.
So she called Doctor Smiley. Doctor Smiley saws Them (saw them) and said, "It must be the measles!"
So Milly and Molly rested.

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Score: B+

Tips):

• 'biddyBid' → 'BiddyBid': 이름은 대문자로 시작해야 합니다.
• 'is' → 'was': 시제를 과거로 맞춰야 합니다.
• 'stay, shared secret' → 'stay, share secrets': 문맥상 시제 일관성을 위해 수정했습니다.
• 'battle' → 'bottle': 'battle'은 의미상 맞지 않으므로 'bottle'로 수정했습니다.
• 'saws Them' → 'saw them': 시제와 철자 오류를 수정했습니다.