The title is Talking to Grandma.
Allison's grandma was just diagnosed with dementia. Allison 's was woorried was worried. Allison 's asked asked, "Do you want to wear your black or blue dress?" Allison 's searched searched the in termet internet for tips on jow how to talk to people with dementia. First, make eye contact before talking. Second, offer only two choices at a time. Third, don't interrupt the person as they talk. The story is useful. I think this story is very useful.
Score: B
Tips:
- 'internet'과 같은 쉬운 단어는 철자 실수를 조심해요.
- 따옴표를 써서 말하는 부분을 더 명확하게 보여줘요. 예: "Do you want to wear your black or blue dress?"
- 마지막 문장에서, 주어를 "I think"로 바꾸면 더 자연스러워요.