첫댓글 ★★★ You have room for improvement ★★★1. whenever I thought of this memory, this trip put me a great mood→ the memory of the trip always put me in a good mood→ thinking of the trip brings back pleasant memories.
Great mornign Aaron!! Thank you for your a revision. I will push myself harder.😄
첫댓글 ★★★ You have room for improvement ★★★
1. whenever I thought of this memory, this trip put me a great mood
→ the memory of the trip always put me in a good mood
→ thinking of the trip brings back pleasant memories.
Great mornign Aaron!! Thank you for your a revision. I will push myself harder.😄