Re: Read It! Unit 2 (Mark)

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this story is "Talking to Grandma."

Allison's grandmother is has dementia, so her family had her move in with them had moved in with her. She wasn't sure what dementia , was, but she looked foward forward to living with her grandmother. A few days later, she began to notice how to hard conversation with her grandmother was. When Allison asked any question, her grandmother didn't answer, so she was trouble troubled. Allison searched the internet for tips on how to communicate with someone who has dementia. The next day, Allison made eye contract contact with her grandmother. She offered only two choice choices at a time and waited for her grandmother. Finally, her grandmother pointed at one. So Allison successed succeeded in communicating with her grandmother.

Score: A-

Tips:

1. 'has'를 사용하여 할머니의 상태를 설명하는 현재형을 유지해야 해요.
2. 'was'를 추가하여 문장이 더 자연스럽게 들리도록 했어요.
3. 몇 가지 철자 오류를 고쳐서 문장을 더 명확하게 만들었어요.