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Dear Dr.miller
I hope this email finds you well.
I am writing to discuss an issue regarding the group project in your class.
* inform은 공지하다, 안내하다라는 뜻이므로 여기서는 부적절.
Unfortunately, a member of our team has been unresponsive for the past few days.
* 과거의 며칠이 아닌, 오늘을 포함한 지난 며칠 동안이라는 말이므로, the past few days가 적절.
Because of this, we had to allocate the assignments again, which has been taking us much longer to complete our project. We are concerned if can’t finish it on time.
We would be very much appreciated if you give us advice on how to submit the project on time. Or, would it be possible for you to have a meeting with us to discuss this issue tomorrow?
* 순서를 조금 바꾸는 것이 더 좋을 것 같아서 바꿔봤습니다.
Thank you for your consideration.
* assistance는 비서나 부하에게 써야 적절함.
Hana Kim
13.
Dear. Librarian
I hope this email finds you well.
I am writing to ask if it possible to extend the loan period of a book (which) I borrowed last week. Its title is “international relationship”.
I have been working on my a graduation thesis, and this book has been very useful as a reference.
I think it will at least a week longer before I finish my thesis, and I believe I need this book as long.
*논문 끝내는데 일주일은 더 걸릴 것 같고, 그 기간 만큼 이 책이 필요할 것 같습니다.
Would it be possible to extend the loan date of the book?
If possible, please let me know what to do for the extension.
Thank you for your support.
Best regards,
Denial