<p style="text-align: left;">The title of this book is Caillou Makes Cookies.<br>He is just a kid and four. And He like exploring. So many things to do. He was just three year's old, he play loudly.So he made cookies. And he went to the kitchen. He spill honey.Cailou decided to make honey cookies. So he is scolded from his mom. Later they made some cookies. <br> <br><br><br>The book is excellent and I want to eat his cookies<br><br><br><br></p>
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첫댓글The title of this book is "Caillou Makes Cookies." (책 제목에 따옴표 추가) He is just a kid and four (추가: "years old"). And (삭제: "And") he likes (변경: "like"를 "likes"로 변경) exploring. (추가: "There are" before "So") So many things to do. (삭제: "He was just three year's old,") When (추가: "When") he was just three years (변경: "year's"를 "years"로 변경) old, he played (변경: "play"를 "played"로 변경) loudly. So his mom came (변경: "coming"을 "came"로 변경) and told him to (추가: "told him to") play quietly, and then (추가: "then") he felt (변경: "is"를 "felt"로 변경) hungry.
So he decided to make (변경: "made"를 "decided to make"로 변경) cookies. And (삭제: "And") he went to the kitchen. He spilled (변경: "spill"을 "spilled"로 변경) honey. So he was (추가: "was") scolded by (변경: "from"을 "by"로 변경) his mom. Later, (쉼표 추가) they made some cookies together (추가: "together"). The book is excellent and I want to eat his cookies. (변경 사항 없음)
첫댓글 The title of this book is "Caillou Makes Cookies." (책 제목에 따옴표 추가) He is just a kid and four (추가: "years old"). And (삭제: "And") he likes (변경: "like"를 "likes"로 변경) exploring. (추가: "There are" before "So") So many things to do. (삭제: "He was just three year's old,") When (추가: "When") he was just three years (변경: "year's"를 "years"로 변경) old, he played (변경: "play"를 "played"로 변경) loudly. So his mom came (변경: "coming"을 "came"로 변경) and told him to (추가: "told him to") play quietly, and then (추가: "then") he felt (변경: "is"를 "felt"로 변경) hungry.
So he decided to make (변경: "made"를 "decided to make"로 변경) cookies. And (삭제: "And") he went to the kitchen. He spilled (변경: "spill"을 "spilled"로 변경) honey. So he was (추가: "was") scolded by (변경: "from"을 "by"로 변경) his mom. Later, (쉼표 추가) they made some cookies together (추가: "together"). The book is excellent and I want to eat his cookies. (변경 사항 없음)