<p style="text-align: left;">Introduction: <br> The title of this story is Ruby’s Piano Practice. The main characters are max and her little brother Max. This story is based pn by Patrick Granleese and Jamie Whitney. <br><br><br>Body-1 (Ruby’s Piano concert):<br> One day, Ruby have to practice beacuse her school concert is next week. However Max wanted to play with fire truck, but Ruby told him to play with other else while she kept practing. Max kept bothering to his older sister. So, she let his brother to play with labster toy, have a lunch, and play in the mud. Finally, Ruby found his fire truck while playing piano and gave it to him.<br><br>Body-2 (Max’s Bath):<br> Max’s body looked disgusting after he eating his lunch. He had to take a bath. His sister, Rubby helped him to bath. He kept eating while she prepared some warm water, peach blossom, some towels, bathrobe, and his bath toys! Fianlly, he took a shower. But, Ruby’s apron was stained with his ice cream.<br><br>Body-3 (Max’s Bad Time):<br> Max couldn’t sleep when his bad time, beacuse he couldn’t sleep without his red rubber elephant. His older sister kept have him sleep without elephant, but he found it many times. Finally, she gave her walkie-talkie bear, polly pig, slinky snake, and duck which are always helped her to sleep every night. In the end, she fell asleep in Max’s romm, and Max find his elephant toys under his bad! He also went to Ruby’s room and fell asleep with his elephant.<br><br><br>Conclusion: Max looks very cute and fun, and Ruby seems determined. I want to have a older sister like Ruby.<br></p>
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첫댓글Introduction: The title of this story is Ruby’s Piano Practice. The main characters are (max) Max and her little brother Max. This story is based (pn) on a work by Patrick Granleese and Jamie Whitney.
Body-1 (Ruby’s Piano concert): One day, Ruby (have to) had to practice because her school concert is (next week) next week. However, Max wanted to play with (fire truck) his fire truck, but Ruby told him to play with (other else) something else while she kept (practing) practicing. Max kept (bothering to) bothering his older sister.
So, she let (his brother) her brother play with (labster) a lobster toy, have (a lunch) lunch, and play in the mud. Finally, Ruby found (his fire truck while playing piano) his fire truck while playing the piano and gave it to him.
Body-2 (Max’s Bath): Max’s body looked disgusting after he (eating) ate his lunch. He had to take a bath. His sister, (Rubby) Ruby, helped him (to bath) bathe. He kept eating while she prepared some warm water, (peach blossom) peach blossom, some towels, (bathrobe) a bathrobe, and his bath toys! (Fianlly) Finally, he took a shower. But, Ruby’s apron was stained with (his) his ice cream.
Body-3 (Max’s Bad Time): Max couldn’t sleep when his (bad time) bedtime, (beacuse) because he couldn’t sleep without his red rubber elephant. His older sister (kept have him sleep without elephant) kept trying to have him sleep without the elephant, but he found it (many times) many times. Finally, she gave (her walkie-talkie bear) him her walkie-talkie bear, Polly Pig, Slinky Snake, and Duck which (are always helped her to sleep every night) always helped her sleep every night.
In the end, she fell asleep in Max’s (romm) room, and Max find (his elephant toys) his elephant toy under (his bad) his bed! He also went to Ruby’s room and fell asleep with his elephant.
Conclusion: Max looks very cute and fun, and Ruby seems determined. I want to have a (older sister like Ruby) older sister like Ruby.
첫댓글 Introduction:
The title of this story is Ruby’s Piano Practice. The main characters are (max) Max and her little brother Max. This story is based (pn) on a work by Patrick Granleese and Jamie Whitney.
Body-1 (Ruby’s Piano concert):
One day, Ruby (have to) had to practice because her school concert is (next week) next week. However, Max wanted to play with (fire truck) his fire truck, but Ruby told him to play with (other else) something else while she kept (practing) practicing. Max kept (bothering to) bothering his older sister.
So, she let (his brother) her brother play with (labster) a lobster toy, have (a lunch) lunch, and play in the mud. Finally, Ruby found (his fire truck while playing piano) his fire truck while playing the piano and gave it to him.
Body-2 (Max’s Bath):
Max’s body looked disgusting after he (eating) ate his lunch. He had to take a bath. His sister, (Rubby) Ruby, helped him (to bath) bathe. He kept eating while she prepared some warm water, (peach blossom) peach blossom, some towels, (bathrobe) a bathrobe, and his bath toys! (Fianlly) Finally, he took a shower. But, Ruby’s apron was stained with (his) his ice cream.
Body-3 (Max’s Bad Time):
Max couldn’t sleep when his (bad time) bedtime, (beacuse) because he couldn’t sleep without his red rubber elephant. His older sister (kept have him sleep without elephant) kept trying to have him sleep without the elephant, but he found it (many times) many times. Finally, she gave (her walkie-talkie bear) him her walkie-talkie bear, Polly Pig, Slinky Snake, and Duck which (are always helped her to sleep every night) always helped her sleep every night.
In the end, she fell asleep in Max’s (romm) room, and Max find (his elephant toys) his elephant toy under (his bad) his bed! He also went to Ruby’s room and fell asleep with his elephant.
Conclusion:
Max looks very cute and fun, and Ruby seems determined. I want to have a (older sister like Ruby) older sister like Ruby.