Re: 1C summary (Andy)

[Sub Tutor]

This story's title is "Milly, Molly, and BiddyBid."

Milly and Molly went BiddyBid's garden (to BiddyBid's garden).

Milly and Molly picked plum (plums) from BiddyBid's plum tree.

So, Milly and Molly eat (ate) BiddyBid's plums.

And, they foxgloves their finger tip (put foxgloves on their fingertips).

Also, Milly and Molly play with various flower (played with various flowers).

After that, Milly and Molly covered in spots (were covered in spots).

So, BiddyBid called doctor smiley (Doctor Smiley).

Doctor Smiley gave plum (gave plums to) Milly and Molly.

So, Milly and Molly eat plum (ate the plums).

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Score: B+

Tips):

• 'went BiddyBid's garden' → 'went to BiddyBid's garden': 'to'가 필요합니다.
• 'picked plum' → 'picked plums': 복수형을 사용해야 합니다.
• 'eat' → 'ate': 시제를 과거형으로 수정해야 합니다.
• 'foxgloves their finger tip' → 'put foxgloves on their fingertips': 더 자연스러운 표현으로 수정했습니다.
• 'covered in spots' → 'were covered in spots': 시제를 맞춰줍니다.
• 'doctor smiley' → 'Doctor Smiley': 이름은 대문자로 시작해야 합니다.
• 'gave plum' → 'gave plums to': 복수형과 문장 구조를 수정했습니다.