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레이언니 컴퓨터에는 ‘’가 보이는 데 칼라본에는 안보여요~~
[contents]
P3 Tip Talk 사진 파라솔과 수화물?짐?으로 교체
[investigative report]
3번째 문단 4번째 줄 se jel ye -> ‘Se jel ye’
Injung -> ‘In jung’
5번째 문단 3번째 줄 its-> it is
8번째 문단 3번째 줄 me -> we/12번째줄 are->is
4번째 문단 2번째 줄 todays->today’s
3번째 문단 2번째 줄 todays->today’s
6번째 문단 8번째 줄 ,when you are the others 삭제 해주세요~
5번째 문단 1번째 줄 sometime->sometimes
본론 3번째줄 The rate of speech and words that we use are->is
7번째줄 the younger generations expresses ->express
16번째줄 how would the friend feel->feels
18번째줄 To put it blunthly. They cannot say~->To put it bluntly, they cannot say~
본론3문단 1줄 any word or expression~->~any word or expression that they want?
P13 두번째문단 ㅅ3줄 When we meet
[feature]
37p.
소제목 Koreas->korea’s
3번째 문단 (태권도) 첫번째 줄 Koreas->Korea’s
Track 문단 4번째 줄 lets->let’s
제일 마지막 줄 lets->let’s
Shooting – Korean shooting star athlete star
36p.
마지막줄 peoples->people’s
[Reporter’s Eye]
서론 첫번째 so obviously there are a popular pets in
Korea.
P34 본론1 밑6줄 cute however,->cute,However,
본론2 밑4줄 but 삭제
2문단 3~4줄 Three Meals for Three Times, -양옆으로 띄어쓰기 두번인지 확인부탁드려요
6~7줄 1 Night 2 Days- 양옆으로 띄어쓰기 두번인지 확인부탁드려요
4불 sang keuni,->’sang keuni’
P35 왼쪽1문단 5줄 consumers->consumer’s
왼쪽2문단 7줄 Do not raise~->”Do not raise~it.”
9줄 I wil abandon these dogs ->’I will abandon these dogs’
오른쪽 1문단 1줄 dogs->dog’s
2문단 7줄 shelters->shelter’s
막줄 humans->human’s
P35 오른쪽 마지막 문단 밑에서 두번째줄 buying -> buy
첫문단 넷째줄 slaughter띄움house
19번째줄 Yet, in Korea, There~->Yet,in Korea, ther
(사진이후)7번째줄 dogs->dogs.
[culture Headlight]
Me-media’s benefit and limitations의 첫문장 . ~positive changes.->positive changes appear
[global frame]
결론 첫 단어 However 삭제 해주세요
P24 2문단 3줄 don’t
막문단 2줄 me-media->’me-media’ / ‘life’ /’V app’ /3줄 ‘Daum TV pot’
P25 소제목 who is a Me-media Star? –Banzz 줄에 맞춰서 왼쪽 정렬
1문단 1~2줄 ‘me-media’
2문단 1줄 Youtube’s
3문단 밑2줄 video’s
막문단 1줄 O’Reilly/’web 2.0’/2줄 ‘web 1.0’/3줄 ‘web 2.0’
P24 밑5줄 My Little Television 기울임꼴
3문단 2줄 barack->Barack
P25 본문 2문단 4줄 Byeolpungsun that is
[editor’s desk]
4문단 Let’s put in some time and effort~
7번째 줄 There are a lot of negativities It’s interesting
Some positives
2번째줄 emplyees are most~->are the most
제목변경 : Little Things Matter
3. 사진 교체
3번째 문단 삭제
[Faculty]
첫번째문단 4번째줄 Googles->Google’s
5번째문단 2번째줄 Chat fields->Chatfield’s
2문단 밑4줄 transplant->’transplant’
3문단 1줄 : First->”First
2줄: nature?->nature?”
밑3문단 막줄 The Luddites->’The Luddites’
막문단 2줄 Tom Chatfields->Tom Chatfield’s
3문단 마지막줄 The Luddites 띄어쓰기
[cover]
P15 3문단 밑 2줄 lets -> let’s
1문단 1줄 artificial ->’ artificial’
Intelligence->’ Intelligence’
2문단 밑 4줄 phrase artificial intelligence->phrase ‘artificial intelligence’
4문단 1~2줄 Noughts and Crosses(tic-tac-toe)->’ Noughts and Crosses(tic-tac-toe)’
2줄o,->”o,”
3줄x,->”x,”
밑5줄 Deep Blue,->’Deep Blue,’
밑2줄 Claudico,->’Claudico,’
P16 1문단 5줄 Zepp->’Zepp’
밑3줄 KR AGIKUS->’KR AGIKUS’
2문단 밑5줄 Alpha GO->’ Alpha GO‘
3문단 밑3줄 AIs->AI’s
4문단 3줄 Apples->Apple’s/Samsungs->Samsung’s
P17 1문단 막줄 weapons->weapon’s
2문단 1줄 IBMs->IBM’s/2줄 patients->patient’s
4문단 3줄 The 4th->”The 4th
P18 1문단 1줄 imbalance->imbalance.”
2줄 below->on the front page
3문단 2줄 doesn’t->doesn’t
7문단 4줄 strong artificial intelligence->’strong artificial intelligence’
Todays->Today’s
4~5줄 a weak intelligence,->’a weak intelligence,’
5줄 strong intelligence->’strong intelligence’
밑6줄 Jarvis->’Jarvis’
밑5줄 Skynet->’Skynet’
P19 1문단 2줄 humans->human’s
3문단 밑 4줄 said, Artificial->said, “Artificial
막줄 care.->care.”
그래프 2020, 2025, 2030 간격조정
The International Data Corporation(IDC)
2문단 1줄->The IDC(International Date Corporation)
P15 두번째문단 6번째줄 intelligence띄우고at
P18 첫번째 문단 2줄 shows the jobs that are->shows that the jobs are
다섯번째 4줄 intelligence is띄우고a
5줄 whereas,띄우고strong
P19 BOX 2020)Detecting a human’s
P19 두번째 문단 6줄 jobs lost->unemployment
[by subway]
P20 마지막 문장 and into->and get into
첫번째문단 마지막줄 to visit if you get where
마지막 문단 밑 3번째줄 see->figure out
3번째문단 Museongdang’s
P21 17번째줄 are most likely->are the most likely-양옆에 띄어쓰기 2개 되어있지 않은 지 확인부탁드려요
2문단 2-3줄 ‘At the Age of Thirty’ 기울임꼴/’The private’s Letter’ 기울임꼴-양옆에 띄어쓰기 2개 되어있지 않은 지 확인부탁드려요
1문단 마지막줄 Don’t->Don’t
2문단 첫번째줄 Kim Kwang-seoks->Kim Kwang-seok’s
[on campus]지하철
본론 2줄 Gyeongchun subway lines, the number of that
4번째 문단, 4번째줄 to change the subway station’s name
P9 큰 사진 가운데 정렬/밑에서 3번째 문장 to help improve students->students’
[oncampus]봉사활동
3번째줄 if you don’t->do not
제목 The Best Way to the World
1문단 1줄 after the -> after this
7줄 gathers->gather
4문단 2줄 making->experiencing
3줄 wil consist of house and wall repair->is repairing of houses and walls
5문단 2줄 program->organization
6줄 committee program preparation->committee’s preparation for volunteering program
마지막 문단 exctly what you need, if you need to add~
[tiptalk]
P30 tip 1 2줄 airlines->airlines’
밑2줄 seats->seat’s
P31 3줄 International Driver’s car
[social forum]
29p 4번째 문단 11번째줄 country’s/13번째줄 nation’s
/4번째줄 Ms.Kim said that she will be~/18번째줄 ~,and citizenship are
28p 2번째문단 10번째줄 Saram-in->,’Saram-in’
29p 4번째줄 Ms.Kim said,띄우고I will
[global frame]
P27 4줄 Neterland’s
밑 5줄 houses’
밑3줄 Belgium’s
P27 첫문단 These fishes
셋째문단 3줄 in Netherlands띄우고border
[interview]
P32 서론 밑에서 2번째 MJP->the Myongji Press
1번째 인터뷰이 첫번째A 밑에서 2번째 –boyfriend’s
인적사항 system,-쉼표삭제
1번 ‘spring ~ dating’
P33 4번째 인터뷰이 A1번 2번째줄 ‘ACNE STUDIO’
3번째줄 My bag’s/’Freitag’
P32 두번째문단
So I’m wearing a pink T-shirt with
[Back Cover ]
- 첫번째 문장 (To enter MJP’s ) 뒤에 온점
[Feature ]
-소제목 Korea s à Korea’s
-3번째 문단 (태권도) 첫번째 줄 Koreas à Korea’s
-Track 문단 4번째 줄 let s à let’s
-제일 마지막 줄 lets à let’s
-p36 마지막줄 people s à people’s
-p37 shooting문단 Korean shooting star à Korean shooting athlete star
[pop up]
p11. 까르보나라 문단 11줄 carbonara -> ‘carbonara’
p10. 피자 8줄 pizza -> ‘pizza’
캘리포니아롤 1줄 curl up in a ball -> ‘curl up in a ball’
p11. 카레 1줄 curry -> ‘curry’
2줄 kari -> ‘kari’
p10. 피자 9줄 passed(띄어쓰기)or(띄어쓰기) round
10줄 bread.(띄어쓰기) In Italy