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레이언니 컴퓨터에는 ‘’가 보이는 데 칼라본에는 안보여요~~

[contents]

P3 Tip Talk 사진 파라솔과 수화물?짐?으로 교체

[investigative report]

3번째 문단 4번째 줄 se jel ye -> ‘Se jel ye’

                    Injung -> ‘In jung’

5번째 문단 3번째 줄 its-> it is

8번째 문단 3번째 줄 me -> we/12번째줄 are->is

4번째 문단 2번째 줄 todays->today’s

3번째 문단 2번째 줄 todays->today’s

6번째 문단 8번째 줄 ,when you are the others 삭제 해주세요~

5번째 문단  1번째 줄 sometime->sometimes

본론 3번째줄 The rate of speech and words that we use are->is

     7번째줄 the younger generations expresses ->express

     16번째줄 how would the friend feel->feels

    18번째줄 To put it blunthly. They cannot say~->To put it bluntly, they cannot say~

본론3문단 1줄 any word or expression‎~->~any word or expression‎ that they want?

P13 두번째문단 ㅅ3줄 When we meet

[feature]

37p.

소제목 Koreas->korea’s

3번째 문단 (태권도) 첫번째 줄 Koreas->Korea’s

Track 문단 4번째 줄 lets->let’s

제일 마지막 줄 lets->let’s

Shooting – Korean shooting star athlete star

36p.

마지막줄 peoples->people’s

[Reporter’s Eye]

서론 첫번째 so obviously there are a popular pets in Korea.

P34 본론1 밑6줄 cute however,->cute,However,

           본론2 밑4줄 but 삭제

           2문단 3~4줄 Three Meals for Three Times, -양옆으로 띄어쓰기 두번인지 확인부탁드려요

           6~7줄  1 Night 2 Days- 양옆으로 띄어쓰기 두번인지 확인부탁드려요

           4불 sang keuni,->’sang keuni’

P35 왼쪽1문단 5줄 consumers->consumer’s

왼쪽2문단 7줄 Do not raise~->”Do not raise~it.”

               9줄 I wil abandon these dogs ->’I will abandon these dogs’

오른쪽 1문단 1줄 dogs->dog’s

           2문단 7줄 shelters->shelter’s

                 막줄 humans->human’s

P35 오른쪽 마지막 문단 밑에서 두번째줄 buying -> buy

첫문단 넷째줄 slaughter띄움house

19번째줄 Yet, in Korea, There~->Yet,in Korea, ther

(사진이후)7번째줄 dogs->dogs.

[culture Headlight]

Me-media’s benefit and limitations의 첫문장 . ~positive changes.->positive changes appear

[global frame]

결론 첫 단어 However 삭제 해주세요

P24 2문단 3줄 don’t

막문단 2줄 me-media->’me-media’  / ‘life’ /’V app’ /3줄 ‘Daum TV pot’

P25 소제목 who is a Me-media Star? –Banzz 줄에 맞춰서 왼쪽 정렬

1문단 1~2줄 ‘me-media’

2문단 1줄 Youtube’s

3문단 밑2줄 video’s

 막문단 1줄 O’Reilly/’web 2.0’/2줄 ‘web 1.0’/3줄 ‘web 2.0’

P24 밑5줄  My Little Television 기울임꼴

3문단 2줄 barack->Barack

P25 본문 2문단 4줄 Byeolpungsun that is

[editor’s desk]

4문단  Let’s put in some time and effort~

7번째 줄 There are a lot of negativities It’s interesting

Some positives

2번째줄 emplyees are most~->are the most

제목변경 : Little Things Matter

3. 사진 교체

3번째 문단 삭제

[Faculty]

첫번째문단 4번째줄 Googles->Google’s

5번째문단 2번째줄 Chat fields->Chatfield’s

2문단 밑4줄 transplant->’transplant’

3문단 1줄 : First->”First

           2줄: nature?->nature?”

밑3문단 막줄 The Luddites->’The Luddites’

막문단 2줄 Tom Chatfields->Tom Chatfield’s

3문단 마지막줄 The Luddites 띄어쓰기

[cover]

P15 3문단 밑 2줄 lets -> let’s

    1문단 1줄 artificial ->’ artificial’

              Intelligence->’ Intelligence’

    2문단 밑 4줄 phrase artificial intelligence->phrase ‘artificial intelligence’

    4문단 1~2줄 Noughts and Crosses(tic-tac-toe)->’ Noughts and Crosses(tic-tac-toe)’

           2줄o,->”o,”

          3줄x,->”x,”

          밑5줄 Deep Blue,->’Deep Blue,’

           밑2줄 Claudico,->’Claudico,’

P16 1문단 5줄 Zepp->’Zepp’

            밑3줄 KR AGIKUS->’KR AGIKUS’

   2문단 밑5줄 Alpha GO->’ Alpha GO‘

   3문단 밑3줄 AIs->AI’s

4문단 3줄 Apples->Apple’s/Samsungs->Samsung’s

P17 1문단 막줄 weapons->weapon’s

    2문단 1줄 IBMs->IBM’s/2줄 patients->patient’s

    4문단 3줄 The 4^th->”The 4^th

P18 1문단 1줄 imbalance->imbalance.”

            2줄 below->on the front page

     3문단 2줄 doesn’t->doesn’t

     7문단 4줄 strong artificial intelligence->’strong artificial intelligence’

              Todays->Today’s

           4~5줄 a weak intelligence,->’a weak intelligence,’

            5줄 strong intelligence->’strong intelligence’

           밑6줄 Jarvis->’Jarvis’

           밑5줄 Skynet->’Skynet’

P19 1문단 2줄 humans->human’s

    3문단 밑 4줄 said, Artificial->said, “Artificial

          막줄 care.->care.”

그래프 2020, 2025, 2030 간격조정

The International Data Corporation(IDC)

2문단 1줄->The IDC(International Date Corporation)

P15 두번째문단 6번째줄 intelligence띄우고at

P18 첫번째 문단 2줄 shows the jobs that are->shows that the jobs are

 다섯번째 4줄 intelligence is띄우고a

          5줄 whereas,띄우고strong

P19 BOX 2020)Detecting a human’s

P19 두번째 문단 6줄 jobs lost->unemployment

[by subway]

P20 마지막 문장 and into->and get into

첫번째문단 마지막줄 to visit if you get where

 마지막 문단 밑 3번째줄 see->figure out

3번째문단 Museongdang’s

P21 17번째줄 are most likely->are the most likely-양옆에 띄어쓰기 2개 되어있지 않은 지 확인부탁드려요

   2문단 2-3줄 ‘At the Age of Thirty’ 기울임꼴/’The private’s Letter’ 기울임꼴-양옆에 띄어쓰기 2개 되어있지 않은 지 확인부탁드려요

 1문단 마지막줄 Don’t->Don’t

 2문단 첫번째줄 Kim Kwang-seoks->Kim Kwang-seok’s

[on campus]지하철

본론 2줄 Gyeongchun subway lines, the number of that

   4번째 문단, 4번째줄 to change the subway station’s name

P9 큰 사진 가운데 정렬/밑에서 3번째 문장 to help improve students->students’

[oncampus]봉사활동

3번째줄 if you don’t->do not

제목 The Best Way to the World

1문단 1줄 after the -> after this

      7줄 gathers->gather

4문단 2줄 making->experiencing

      3줄 wil consist of house and wall repair->is repairing of houses and walls

5문단 2줄 program->organization

      6줄 committee program preparation->committee’s preparation for volunteering program

마지막 문단 exctly what you need, if you need to add~

[tiptalk]

P30 tip 1 2줄 airlines->airlines’

   밑2줄 seats->seat’s

P31 3줄 International Driver’s car

[social forum]

29p 4번째 문단 11번째줄 country’s/13번째줄 nation’s

/4번째줄 Ms.Kim said that she will be~/18번째줄 ~,and citizenship are

28p 2번째문단 10번째줄 Saram-in->,’Saram-in’

29p 4번째줄 Ms.Kim said,띄우고I will

[global frame]

P27 4줄 Neterland’s

 밑 5줄 houses’

밑3줄 Belgium’s

P27 첫문단 These fishes

 셋째문단 3줄 in Netherlands띄우고border

[interview]

P32 서론 밑에서 2번째 MJP->the Myongji Press

     1번째 인터뷰이 첫번째A 밑에서 2번째 –boyfriend’s

                             인적사항 system,-쉼표삭제

                            1번 ‘spring ~ dating’

P33 4번째 인터뷰이 A1번 2번째줄 ‘ACNE STUDIO’

                                3번째줄 My bag’s/’Freitag’

P32 두번째문단

So I’m wearing a pink T-shirt with

[Back Cover ]
- 첫번째 문장 (To enter MJP’s )  뒤에 온점

[Feature ]

-소제목 Korea s à Korea’s

-3번째 문단 (태권도) 첫번째 줄 Koreas à Korea’s

-Track 문단 4번째 줄 let s à let’s

-제일 마지막 줄 lets à let’s

-p36 마지막줄 people s à people’s

-p37 shooting문단 Korean shooting star à Korean shooting athlete star

[pop up]

p11. 까르보나라 문단 11줄 carbonara -> ‘carbonara’

p10. 피자 8줄 pizza -> ‘pizza’

     캘리포니아롤 1줄 curl up in a ball -> ‘curl up in a ball’

p11. 카레 1줄 curry -> ‘curry’

          2줄 kari -> ‘kari’

p10. 피자 9줄 passed(띄어쓰기)or(띄어쓰기) round

          10줄 bread.(띄어쓰기) In Italy