Niagara falls David

[student]

The title of this book is Niagara Falls.
Niagara is one of the most famous deep water in the world.
Niagara Falls consists of three waterfalls
the American falls.
The horseshoe is in the largest of the three and drops an average of 57 meters into the river below .
An Italian woman was the only woman to cross the Niagara gorge on a tightrope.
This book is a little interesting

[Teacher1]

The title of this book is "Niagara Falls." Niagara (Falls) is one of the most famous (waterfalls) in the world. Niagara Falls consists of three waterfalls(: the) American Falls(, the Bridal Veil Falls, and the Horseshoe Falls). The (H)orseshoe (Falls) is (̶i̶n̶) the largest of the three and drops an average of 57 meters into the river below. ̶A̶n̶ ̶I̶t̶a̶l̶i̶a̶n̶ ̶w̶o̶m̶a̶n̶ ̶w̶a̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶o̶n̶l̶y̶ ̶w̶o̶m̶a̶n̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶c̶r̶o̶s̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶N̶i̶a̶g̶a̶r̶a̶ ̶g̶o̶r̶g̶e̶ ̶o̶n̶ ̶a̶ ̶t̶i̶g̶h̶t̶r̶o̶p̶e̶.̶ This book is (very) interesting.

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