Re: Read it Unit7 Isabella

[Teacher Winget]

The book's title is "Digital Detox." After I read this book, I thought this story was interesting because I heard about Digital Detox for the first time. I learned about Digital Detox from this book. I will try a Digital Detox later. Going on a trip without using the phone is a very good idea. Using the phone every day is very bad for the eyes. Not using the phone every day can make you feel refreshed in the morning. So I learned about why it’s important not to use the phone every day.

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 문법: "I listen Digital Detox first" 대신 "I heard about Digital Detox for the first time"라고 해야 자연스럽고, "Play not everyday tomorrow morning is refreshed" 대신 "Not using the phone every day can make you feel refreshed in the morning"이라고 해야 해요.
2. 내용 추가: "왜 디지털 디톡스가 건강에 좋은지 더 설명해 보세요. 예를 들어, 더 나은 수면과 눈의 피로 감소에 도움이 될 수 있어요!"