The title of this book is "The Grand Canyon." The Grand Canyon is located in Arizona. Visitors to The Canyon are often left speechless by its incredible size and magnificent colors. Canyons are usually formed over millions of years by river, rain, and wind erosion. Spanish ̶e̶x̶p̶l̶o̶r̶e̶s̶ explorers were searching for the rumored "Seven cities of gold". They came across a great Canyon. But they returned when they ran out of water. Also, there are many different species like bald eagles, mountain lions, elks, black widow spiders, and rattlesnakes. The animal figurines that were discovered inside caves at the Grand Canyon mean that humans have been living in the Canyon for ̶a̶t̶ at least four thousand years. Nowadays, rafting along the Colorado ̶r̶i̶v̶e̶r̶ River and biking along the rim are popular activities. I also want to go rafting along the Colorado ̶r̶i̶v̶e̶r̶ River.
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- Adding a concluding sentence about the book itself would strengthen it.
- Adding more details or interesting facts about the Grand Canyon could make the essay more engaging and informative.